This week we have been crafting sentences. We were making our sentences clearer and make sure we're leaving in the important details.
This is my sentence:
A terrible earthquake just hit Christchurch and killed hundreds of people.
I worked on this sentence and then chose my favourite new sentence:
A huge terrible earthquake killed hundreds of people in Christchurch.
By Tom
Wednesday 21 October 2015
Tuesday 13 October 2015
Cute little visitors to WDS
We have some very cute little visitors at school this morning. Nathan found some baby ducks on his front lawn this morning. We have lots of questions about them!
Thursday 1 October 2015
Farewell Ethan
...Ethan You have been a huge part of my world for the last 2 years and 4 months. I can’t tell you how many photos and videos I have taken of you,
My own boys have made the comment that there are more photos of you on my phone and laptop than there are of them.
They are right of course.
Wow we have had some very special days. It has been a truly rich experience working with you and I have loved it.
I wish you well in Heriot. I will keep up with your progress...
Here is the slideshow I made using some of the photos and videos I have taken. I hope you enjoy it
Just click on the link.
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